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***WINNERS ANNOUNCED*** Sergeant-Major Illivia's bio
« on: July 13, 2008, 05:05:26 pm »
We asked you in this thread to write the bio of Sergeant-Major Illivia, who narrates our new Faction War Recruiting Guide.

It's been a tough decision for the judges, but we've selected the winners. The top three stories appear below in winning order.

We don't have enough room for all of the entries, but the runners up are posted below the winners.

Congratulations to the winners and thanks to everyone who entered the contest. We hope it was fun for you.

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Re: ***WINNERS ANNOUNCED*** Sergeant-Major Illivia's bio
« Reply #1 on: July 13, 2008, 05:07:40 pm »
Lost Soul of a Caldari Spy
By DeathDealerZero
First place

A single light shines on the plain steel desk in front of the window. Documents are piled neatly on the right side of the desk, and the stationery is lined up on the left. All in order. There is a faint groan coming from the base of the chair, upon which, we see a slight, feminine shape. This is Illivia. Sergeant Major Illivia of the Gallente Federal Defence Union, if you please. She is leaning back, eyes closed, with her head resting uncomfortably on her right shoulder. Her slender hands are balled into anxious fists. The toes inside her shined black boots curl and straighten, curl and straighten, as if they are trying to climb out of the leather.

Father is standing at the window, looking out at the swirling nebulae and faint points of stars. Little Illivia sits swinging her feet off the edge of a bench to high for her to touch the steel decking. She is wondering how long the journey to Gallente Prime will take. “These transport ships are sooooo slow” she thinks, to a small tune she has been humming since they boarded. She opens her mouth to ask her father when they would arrive, when there is a huge rumble, distant but distinctive, from the other end of the ship. Her father wheels around, fixes her with a frightened stare, then shouts something. Our little Illivia tries to make out the sound of his voice, but a loud mechanical whirring has enveloped her ears. As the ship’s warp drive kicks in, the cabin gives a violent lurch. Another crash from the far side, a scream from the next room, children crying, and a man shouting. The door bursts open, and in step three figures, silhouetted by the corridor lights. A large bald man enters, and strikes her father to the floor. As he looks up in a stunned gaze, the bald man stamps on his head, which emits a very audible crack, even over the sound of the warp drive. Her mother bursts into the room, reaching for Illivia, but is intercepted by the second attacker. He throws her back into the corridor, where a beam of green light penetrates her body, just above the naval. The third man lowers his weapon.  The woman, once strong, crumples to the floor in a lifeless heap. Then her mother’s assassin  steps  towards Illivia, reaches out a hand, and…

Her eyelids snap open, almost ripping themselves from her face. Her pupils focus, and her ears acknowledge the bright chirping of the incoming call on her video intercom. She swivels in her chair to face the window. The dark, boundless void of Eve is replaced by the weathered face of Wing Commander Yoshi Horitomi
“Did I wake you Sergeant Major?”
“Not at all. Why do you ask?”
“You have an imprint of your epaulette on your right cheek.” Illivia touches her face, feels the indentation in her skin, and thinks to herself “Mental note-Fire Wing  Commander Horitomi.”
“What’s the nature of your call, Commander?” she asks, fighting to keep her face from blushing.
“We’ve just had presidential confirmation from the Federation. A fleet has been dispatched to Wiyrkomi Peace Corps, in Dantumi solar system, where Caldari are assembling a heavy attack fleet. Orders are to destroy the fleet and station.” Illivia’s stomach sinks, almost to her shoes. At least it might stop her toes from curling. Her mouth and throat go dry, as if she has just breathed a lung full of space dust, and all she can manage to say, almost whisper is, “That will be all, Commander.” The screen fades, and the panoramic vista of Eve returns, but now, the space is not empty. Roughly 200 ships are moving towards a jump gate in the far distance. As she watches with mounting terror, the foul smell of her mothers dying body fill her nostrils. A strong, sweet odour, like live stock through a burning process plant. “Why that smell, why now? Damn it mother, I have enough to think about!” Then she sees it-the light growing, a single flash, the ships gone. The fleet, her fleet, advancing toward Caldari space. The Wiyrkomi HQ, inside which, her Caldari family are sleeping sound. The family, formed after years of imprisonment at the hands of her enemy. The enemy who have raised her, nurtured her, made her their own…..and who have made her a spy in her own camp. Discovering the secrets of her real bloodline-Gallente.

Torn between ancestry and family, her hands leave their prints on the window. Then the prints fade, like any hope of peace.
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Re: ***WINNERS ANNOUNCED*** Sergeant-Major Illivia's bio
« Reply #2 on: July 13, 2008, 05:10:06 pm »
My personal bio: Sergeant Major Illivia
By Lavalle
2nd Place

I grew up in a lot of places. I had the illusion of a good family and a
good life up until I was sixteen or so. I was a station pup in Hatakani
and a little place called Jita. My parents were part of this little
underground radical nationalist group convinced that the Caldari's
oppressive rule over their sovereign space was the blight of the
universe, and that the Federation would one day consume us again. They
wanted to be catalysts for that kind of... revolution. I suppose that
means that I was Caldari born, but by blood only. Anyone with the right
amount of ISK can change even that about himself.

Here's the kicker. My parents were smart, but they had no idea that they
were being monitored. They weren't as crafty as they thought, it turned
out. The Squids' - Calamari, whatever the greenies are callin' em these
days - their intel found out that my pop was working on a ship prototype
to be commissioned to the Gallente Federation using some cutting edge
Caldari technology. Stolen, of course. He got a pass on to a privately
owned Badger to deliver the finished schematics to a contact in Sinq.
Found out later that he was ambushed on the boarder by some Navy ships.
He and the plans were both vapor. My mum was executed for her role in
the information transfer, and I was placed in a hell hole mining vessel
turned prison. I would be damned if I was gonna spend my days picking
away at rocks so that these rat bastards could build better ships. But I
did. For three long, miserable years, I did. As prisoners, we were ah...
expendable, you see. Our ship was specially modulated for a particular
kind of Omber that we could only find on the fringes of Serpentis
territory. I swear, it was only a matter of time before our 'defences' -
if you could call a damn lousy-fit gang of rookies in virgin frigates
that - were overrun by a group with enough balls and enough laundered
ISK to stand against the oh-so-mighty Caldari state. So, I did what any
self-respecting prisoner would do. I ran. When security on the ship
collapsed and the lock system busted open, I found a dry pod and got
myself out of the ship before the pirates' drones finally tore in to the
hull of the ship.

I thought I was dog meat. I was drifting in a capsule with barely enough
function to keep me alive. It turned out that we were unknowingly being
used as bait by a Federal Navy police force. I saw a few interceptors
pop in to the belt on the little on-board scanner, and before I know it,
a whole damn fleet of 'em had rolled over or scattered the enemy. I got
recovered by a Federate Ship, and the rest is history. Other prisoners
were recovered, sure. Most of them corpses. A couple of them hangin' on
for dear life. I wasn't exactly welcomed with open arms, but after they
did their homework on my family, they agreed to let me join the Academy.
Graduated with honors even, though I never thought I would make it here.
I declined a promotion to officer status. I'd rather run a goddamn
mining laser than push pens and respond to "YESSIR NOSSIR" my whole career.

I didn't get assigned to the Federal Defense Union. The FDU is my
creation; my vision. It's a child with wants, needs, and growing pains.
It symbolizes defiance against tyranny by those who claim to be
tyrannized. We're fighting a war of hypocrisy. We're fighting for our
ideals and for everything it means to be Gallente. How else could you
get a bunch of former pirates, bickering corporation officers, and low
profile head hunters to band in to such a cohesive bunch? You give them
a vision. You show them truth, and you show them why it's the truth. Our
militia men aren't brain washed. Their eyes are just... opened. And so
are mine.

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Re: ***WINNERS ANNOUNCED*** Sergeant-Major Illivia's bio
« Reply #3 on: July 13, 2008, 05:10:44 pm »
Sergeant-Major Illivia's Bio
By Encalderante
3rd Place
 
Guts. My slime-bucket son-of-a-bitch father gave me nothing but guts. Understand that. My twenty-three years in the Federation Navy gave me every other inch of who I am. They gave me sweat that'll burn the skin right off the recruits. They gave me scars that would make your mother cry. They gave my first post on a Vexor-class Cruiser's drone command bay. That was some post. They also gave me freedom. Before I joined the Defense Union I was a salvage dog on Dreg Level BT-Theta on the Federation Navy Assembly Plant in Aunia, just like my damn father before me. My mother was probably some whore planet-side, but she dumped me on my dad like a hot lug-nut in a pail. Hell - I grew up tough.
 
I did time in the brig at fifteen for messing up a trader's face in a brawl. He deserved it. I got off easy, and after three years of solitary and a parole device implant later, I shambled out of that hole and couldn't stand the thought of going back to the salvage sorting drudge of a job my father left me when he died of the hacking cough. Son-of-a-bitch. Being Gallente and proud means nothing if your freedom is squandered on a hell-hole job. A drank myself near to the edge of the pit and decided that the only place for me was on a ship. On a ship you can be free, I thought. So I dragged myself to the on-station recruitment office and put my X on the line. They dropped me on a Navy Imicus as a galley scrubber. I spent those first years working my way up, learning first how to maintenance drones, and then how to fly the little buggers, and finally, during the first days of the Capsuleer Age, I saw combat. It was just a couple of Serpentis bastards in frigates, but my drones killed them dead. It was then that I knew that I was free.
 
When the Caldari attacked us at Gallente Prime, the Federation Defense Union was called into action. Because of my experience in combat and with a variety of vessels, I was tapped to head up the recruit training program at the new station in Villore. As part of this placement, I was awarded the position of Sergeant-Major. Capsuleers come to me when they don't know who to talk to next, but my primary assignment is to train the crew for their vessels. Knowing that the kids I train are out there killing the tight-ass Caldari really makes my day. It takes guts and skill to fly in combat, but there's glory to be had, and freedom. Never forget that. I am Sergeant Major Jakob Illivia. Welcome to boot camp.

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Re: ***WINNERS ANNOUNCED*** Sergeant-Major Illivia's bio
« Reply #4 on: July 13, 2008, 05:11:48 pm »
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