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EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« on: June 30, 2008, 06:09:05 am »
****WINNERS****

The winners of the FW Write-the-Bio Contest are:

Lost Soul of a Caldari Spy
By DeathDealerZero
1st Place

My personal bio: Sergeant Major Illivia
By Lavalle
2nd Place


Sergeant-Major Illivia's Bio
By Encalderante
3rd Place

Congratulations!


Prizes will be sent soon!

Well done and thanks to all for your submissions!

Read the winners plus a few randomly selected entries HERE

« Last Edit: July 14, 2008, 07:45:53 am by SghnDubh »


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Re: EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« Reply #1 on: June 30, 2008, 06:18:22 am »
I hope Hex goes for this. Something like this would be right up her alley. The girl is a dam good wrighter.
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Re: EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« Reply #2 on: July 02, 2008, 09:41:07 am »
then we mere mortal writers wont stand a chance :\'(
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Re: EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« Reply #3 on: July 03, 2008, 03:54:50 pm »
Woo.

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Re: EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« Reply #4 on: July 04, 2008, 10:48:36 am »
I'm in. Who's Hex?
I was approached by my son one day. He asked "Father please teach me Patience, as it is the greatest of all virtues" Too busy to be bothered with his inane prattle, I picked up a peice of copper wire from my work bench, and balled it as tightly as I could.
"When you bring me this wire again, it should be perfectly straight. Then I will teach you Patience."
Many days later he actually came back, and to my surprise, the wire was perfectly straight. But, again I was busy with my work. I took the wire, looked at it breifly, and balled it once again as tightly as I could.
"Do it again" I said.

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Re: EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« Reply #6 on: July 04, 2008, 03:57:50 pm »
She is a good writer, but I think I'll try my luck. I'm in  ;)

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Re: EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« Reply #7 on: July 04, 2008, 08:55:01 pm »
She's not bad. Pretty good for usng game expiriences. A bit odd the mix between WOW and EVE, but not a bad manner of blending. Still, a bio is a bit different. We'll see how it works out. If she enters I wish her best of luck.
I was approached by my son one day. He asked "Father please teach me Patience, as it is the greatest of all virtues" Too busy to be bothered with his inane prattle, I picked up a peice of copper wire from my work bench, and balled it as tightly as I could.
"When you bring me this wire again, it should be perfectly straight. Then I will teach you Patience."
Many days later he actually came back, and to my surprise, the wire was perfectly straight. But, again I was busy with my work. I took the wire, looked at it breifly, and balled it once again as tightly as I could.
"Do it again" I said.

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Re: EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« Reply #8 on: July 12, 2008, 02:08:28 pm »
When is the winner going to be declared... I can't wait to read some of the entries

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Re: EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« Reply #9 on: July 12, 2008, 02:20:41 pm »
I can't wait either to to see the entries either. I dabble in a bit of fictional writting in my spare time and really enjoy seeing what other people can come up with. I will hold off writing any short stories myself atm in battleclinic until i get to grips with game mechanics and terminology :)
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Re: EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« Reply #10 on: July 12, 2008, 03:56:24 pm »

We'll be posting updates to this soon(tm)!


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Re: EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« Reply #11 on: July 14, 2008, 07:22:54 am »
When/Where can we admire the entries :)

edit: nvm ... it´s all there now, ty
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Re: EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« Reply #12 on: July 15, 2008, 10:30:27 am »
WOW!! i cant believe i Won thankyou so much!


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Re: EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« Reply #13 on: July 15, 2008, 10:42:11 am »
Just read these... were all very good. Too bad I did not participate  :banghead:
The drones are mighty... expendable... unforgiving and loyal. Where do I get more!

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Re: EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« Reply #14 on: July 15, 2008, 10:58:32 pm »
Just read these... were all very good. Too bad I did not participate  :banghead:

Sounds like you think you could've taken home the prize...


Got to be in it to win it  ;)
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« Reply #15 on: July 16, 2008, 04:23:35 pm »
Planning on posting what I come up with soon. Just for fun.
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Re: EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« Reply #16 on: July 18, 2008, 03:36:00 pm »
My Version...

Sergeant-Major Illivia

   She was heaving in deeps breaths; it was her body’s way of supporting the adrenaline rush she was feeling. It happened every time she needed to enforce the laws, Concord was around to keep peace, and Sergeant Illivia would have it no other way. Warping to the aggressor with all weapon systems locked (as was the standard operating procedure) all the while holding off her mental command to fire until warp scrambling was confirmed. Sergeant Illivia once again enforced the law, attacking a ship in empire space for anything other than self defense was a death sentence to your own ship that Concord was always ready to satisfy. It took 12 seconds from the infraction to the destruction of the Caldari cruiser. Watching the pod slowly align for warp to the nearest gate, a familiar thought ran through Illivia’s mind once again. It was a dream, no a nightmare she could never get out of her head.

“Hey darling, the holographic projector is flickering again” said a woman. “Well it’s probably that durned beta power diagnostic unit (PDU) again” said a gruff sounding man. “Daddy,  please fix it, my favorite program is coming on”, said a very young Illivia. “Anoder swiff kick should get it goin again” her dad said. “Thank you Daddy”, was Illivia’s excited response. Her recollection of this event always started out this way, everything is ok… but it quickly goes wrong. Illivia’s dad had been kicking that PDU over and over for about 8 months now. He was not an engineer or a very good pilot… I mean, who had to be when all you needed these days were jump points. Everything was automated when it came to piloting a ship, even defense systems could be automated these days. So he never thought twice about kicking something he didn’t know how to fix, kicking the PDU fixed the problem most of the time and that was good enough for him.

Leg lifted and ready to kick, he said to himself “I gotta’ replace this PDU in the next station”, a phrase he had said each time he kicked the thing. WHAM! (nothing), WHAMM! (power surged various system interfaces), WWHAMMM! Lights started to flicker “that should do it” he said. Then all power went out, seconds later all systems rebooted. All systems were coming online, red warning lights and combat alarms began to go off. The power surge had damage the ships security identification scanners and everything was popping up as hostile on the scanners. The ship began to fire at all targets (thanks to automatic defense systems).

Concord ships began to show up and were added to the ships targeting list. The family was in the pod… they were safe. A large concentration of concord ships were still arriving to this outright violation of the law. Concord was here to do a job, the volleys began. Volley one – shields down, armor 23%, volley 2 – armor 93%, volley 3 – armor down, hull 52% (destruction imminent pod ready for deployment), volley 4 – hull 100% ship destroyed, POD in space, aggressor ship neutralized. Then another shot was fired… a missile from a previously targeted battleship. Though it was legal to defend yourself in empire space… most people did not fire on PODs. It was more like a courtesy; one this unfortunate family was not given. The missile screamed towards them and BAWOOOM! The POD was gone.
Illivia immediately awake in her clone for the first time. What had just happened? She had just been on the ship with her family and now she was here in a station. She looked around and so no one she knew, it was like she was in a graveyard, she was surrounded by unmoving clones. Though she did not understand it… where was she. Seconds later a robot entered to ensure the jumping process was successful. It analyzed Illivia’s brain waves and then a green light blinked and a door opened. She was cleared to leave. “But where are my parents” Illivia said. The robot pulled Illivia’s record from its database and said in a squeaky robot voice “Ship Destroyed, Pod Destroyed… contract 5A32EY1... female child clone information uplinked, female clone information unavailable, male clone information unavailable”. “What does that mean” Illivia said. “Parents Deceased” replied the squeaky robot voice. Illivia began to cry. She was adopted by a Concord pilot who heard the tragic story. Under his training she emerged as a fantastic pilot. She followed in his footsteps and not only joined Concord but quickly went up the enlisted ranks. Entering combat tournaments when she could, Illivia was as seasoned and decorated as a combat pilot could be.

Illivia’s Display blinked “standby for an important message”, showed up on her console.  “The Concord headquarters station in Yulai has been destroyed.” Illivia gasped. The message continued “The CONCORD Assembly, has announced the immediate authorization of the "Emergency Militia War Powers Act". The War Powers provision of the CONCORD Charter authorizes the "immediate and unconditional formation of capsuleer militias among the nation-state members of the CONCORD Assembly for the purpose of waging uncontested war within the boundaries of Empire space." Illivia grinned… she loved combat. With her contract with Concord about to expire… this was a timely opportunity.

So Under the Emergency Militia War Powers Act, Illivia formed her own elite militia. Most of which were her own Concord subordinates.
« Last Edit: July 24, 2008, 03:17:57 pm by spanishleo »
The drones are mighty... expendable... unforgiving and loyal. Where do I get more!

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Re: EvE Online Exclusive + Contest!
« Reply #17 on: July 23, 2008, 04:27:55 pm »
I can't really believe I got second. Very, very nice winning bio. Thank you! :)